Reviewer’s Name: Alesha Bingham Writer’s Name Cynthia King PEER EDITING/REVISION WORKSHEET FOR EXPOSITORY ENTRIESEntry Number: 5 Entry Title: HonestyEDITOR’S COMMENTS: 1. Statement explains the topic that the writer is going to discuss. YES Write the topic here. Honesty
2. Reason explains why the topic is important. YES 3. Example #1 shows why the statement and reason are correct. YES 4. Explanation #1 ties example #1 back to the statement and reason. YES How? Because she provides good details to back up what her main topic is.
5. Example #2 shows why the statement and reason are correct. YES 6. Explanation #2 ties example #2 back to the statement and reason. YES How? Because again she supports what she says in the text. She also provides good examples.
7. "What Difference Does it Make?" wraps up the entire entry byproviding a "big picture" view of why what writer said is important. YES 8. Writer uses vocabulary relevant to detective fiction. YES
9. I circled punctuation, mechanical, and structural errors. YES
10. I conferenced with the writer about his/her entry. NOReturn this form to the writer so that s/he can attach it to his/her rough drafts.WRITER’S COMMENTS: 1. The editor’s comments were helpful to me. YES NO2. I understood what the editor wanted me to do. YES NO3. I feel confident that I can make the necessary revisions. YES NO4. At my next conference with the teacher, I need to discuss or ask about the following:
