Today I sat and watched 3 of my peers do their presentation for math and English. The three people that presented today were Jasmine Bluford, Dwayne McCutchin along with Hasan Bey and Maurice Bradford who was supposed to present with Lazetta Dunlap. In this essay I will critique their individual projects and tell you my personal thoughts on each one. Each project I critique will be based upon a rubric that goes from 1 to 5 in different levels.
The first project I saw was by Jasmine Bluford who has a hairstyling business called Blossom. First I think the name she chose was very cute and creative and I like the originality of it. Her website she did was very well and it had enough detail to sale the project but I do think that she could have had some pictures of the different hairstyles that she is able to do. Jasmine’s actual presentation when she was talking about her project she needed to speak up a little more and she didn’t seem like she was very confident in her service. I think she had a little difficultly answering the questions and that comes back to not being confident about your product/ service. Overall Jasmine did a pretty good job and if she just becomes more confident about her service then I think her business could really go far.
The second presentation I saw was by Maurice Bradford and Lazetta Dunlap who has a restaurant business called The World. First off I love the name because it really relates to the concept of the restaurant which was serving food from different countries. Even though his partner Lazetta was not there to support him and help the presentation I think he did a good job. He seemed very confident when presenting and his website really had just the right amount of information talking about the business. Maurice’s overall stance in presenting to the audience was good he was able to answer the questions really well and I think the audience was really able to grasp the concept of the business.
The third and final presentation was by Dwayne McCutchin and Hasan Bey who had a business where they built websites for other people unfortunately I was not able to catch the name of the business but I’m sure it was very good. The first thing is the overall website I think it was good that they had a lot of details on their and they also had some examples of the websites they have built. I think they were very confident and sure of their service and they were able to fully explain their business. The prices they set per paragraph were overboard I think it is too much to charge five dollars per paragraph when someone could go somewhere else and get it cheaper. Overall they did a good job and if they keep going with the business it could really go far.
Finally I will close by saying that today’s presentations were good overall and if everybody would take the critiques posted myself and others they could really go far with their businesses. The project I personally think was the best was Maurice’s and the project name I like the best today was Jasmine’s but the project that I think would bring in the most income would be Dwayne’s and Hasan’s . If everyone just takes these critiques in mind then I’m sure they will be rolling in money in no time. Everyone has dreams that can come to life.
